Wedding Make-Up! Gimme opinions

Ok ladies, I am not used to wearing make-up at all. I find it a bit intimidating. But I want to look for the pics in August, so I went to MAC and had them help me out. I told them I wanted dramatic eyes and subtle lips.

Under the cut you'll see two pics of me. Give me an honest opinion please of the make-up job and what, if anything, you'd change.

( arghhh! I'm showing actual photos of myself... )