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Behind the cut is the first work larger than 100x100 I'm pretty proud of.

I'd love some feedback, especially from roniabirk as I really look up to your skills Rons.

 

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Its very pretty, but

[lurkerwithout.livejournal.com]

Is it supposed to look...Um...Billboardy?

Cause it kinda looks like that with the visible cut edges...

But still very pretty...

Re: Its very pretty, but

[zerographic.livejournal.com]

Hmm. Tell me what you mean by "visible cute edges."

Her leg really is that straight across in the pic. Oh, perhaps you mean the segment of hair visible through the arm juncture? That does look overly straight

Re: Its very pretty, but

[lurkerwithout.livejournal.com]

Basically if you look closely at the picture you can see lines...That look like either fold lines or where pieces are joined together, like on a billboard...

You have to look at it pretty closely though...

Still looks very good though...

Re: Its very pretty, but

[zerographic.livejournal.com]

Ahh, I see what you mean. yes, supposed to look like that, with a grungy feel.

Thanks for feedback :)

[roniabirk.livejournal.com]

It's very nice! Is that the biggest size?

From what I can see on this size, the blending is great; the texture works wells; and the coloring is nice. One thing I might say would be to try and balance out the two pictures of Eliza. She's very glowy/white on the left, but still very richly colored on the right. Unless that was your goal. If it was, then I would try to make the transition of color to colorless more prominent in the rest of the picture.

Good job! :)